Ok so this one im unsure about it was a story about the apocalypse ( i never know how to spell that fuckin word lol) it felt a bit cliche? like it was like cool but then it got like boring to me lol. it was inspired by girls last tour originally. XD i mean i think my issue is i made the setting feel way too boring. maybe if the setting is a cool sort of apocalypse maybe it could help? have more environmental story telling? idk? the character motives made no sense it was just like meh. XD so maybe one day ill fix it XD But right now i got more fleshed out things to work on XD
Update 10/05/2023. This project is canned. One day I will return to the apocalypse idea but for now it is finished. I am reusing a character from this story in a different one.
Update for myself 10/26/2023. Maybe I should rework the apocalypse idea into like a story about just 1 person wandering around. Maybe keep Cali for that story. I do like her design a lot. Idk about Antonio himself. I never really knew what to do with him.
The original lore for this story was based off of the anime "Girls Last Tour". I had watched it and felt so inspired. I made the characters Antonio orignally named Orio or something? He was way more aggressive in some of the art. His personality was a no messing around sorta guy? He would be accompanied by Itsuki. Who was just sort of the aloof type who was just there. Both of them would change drastically both physically and personality wise. Itsuki became the villain, cold hearted and cunning. While Antonio would become a macho man who was pretty friendly to everyone. Cali was the same the whole time from her creation. She was a mechanic who was adventurous and loud. I think she had somethin fucked up happen to her. I think... I really did like these characters and all the concept art I made for them. But story wise I just was clueless on how to make it interesting. The original plan was to make a web comic with these characters but that would be too much drawing so I was gonna make a Visual Novel instead. That fell through too.
Moving forward; I'm just gonna focus on all my other stories (that are way more developed). This was a fun time and a good learning experiance.
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